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Submitted: June 13, 2012
Image Size: 1.0 MB
Resolution: 3456×5154

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Make:Canon
Model:Canon EOS 600D
Shutter Speed:1/60 second
Aperture:F/4.0
Focal Length:24 mm
ISO Speed:200
Date Taken:Jun 13, 2012, 11:06:16 AM
Software:Adobe Photoshop CS5 Macintosh
Sensor Size:15mm

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B is for Birdby =Nilanja

Photography / Conceptual

fly little bird
spread out your wings

fly
be free

this is my second photo of my A is for Alphabet Project

I had the finished picture in mind before shooting and of course it didn't come out like I wanted...
still I think it isn't that bad^^

I really would love to get some constructive critique on this photo! That would mean a lot!

EDIT: I reedited the picture because I didn't like the background of the old version. And I noticed that my editing technique changed a bit - it actually got better^^

the old version can be found here:

Critique by ~sweetsongbird Sep 15, 2012, 6:42:29 PM

I can critique? C:

Your expression is what makes this photo good (and of course, your little wings) It's sort of distant and a little sad, like wings are never too small to fly.

The background was a good choice too, because I'm not getting too distracted by bright bokehs or flashy lights. Simple is as powerful as busy.

I love your hairstyle...honestly I know that's off topic but I always admire it in your photos ^o^ If you had clipped in extensions or taken the photo with your hair longer somehow, it wouldn't have the same effect as it does.

This photo is really innocent and it ignites memories of wanting to fly off from a situation. You couldn't have done it better really, and always be proud of it and do not doubt your ability. Awesome work, and I will always look forward to more!

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