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the sisters

I am not really happy about this...the whole concept is probably not the best. the execution neither...
what do you think?

models: my sister and I

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transparent24 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like this picture! It has a lot of atmosphere and feeling :)

Plus you are both really beautiful :dance:
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Nilanja Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013
thank you very much :D
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transparent24 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome :D
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peterle28 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Professional Photographer
Ich finde es ganz toll!! Es kommt total authentisch rüber und bindet einen so emotional mit ein - also den Betrachter!! Dies ist der wichtigste Schritt zu einem klasse Foto...
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Nilanja Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012
vielen dank! toll, dass es dir so gut gefällt :la:
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peterle28 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Professional Photographer
Es hat mich berührt. Und damit hat es mir auch gefallen...
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Nilanja Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
:la:
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:iconzouberi:
Zouberi Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012   Photographer
Oh, du hast ne Schwester. xD
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Nilanja Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012
jep :P
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Zouberi Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012   Photographer
Darf ich die haben?^^
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Nilanja Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012
:fork:
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Zouberi Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012   Photographer
Net? xD
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ScionicSpectre Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
I like the idea of you having enough similarities to make the composition symmetrical, but I do feel like the skull and candle could have more difference to draw out the impact. I mean, the eye of the skull doesn't look too sunken due to the lighting, and if it were turned straight it may look more menacing, as if it's looking into the viewer's soul.

Also, the pattern on the wall behind seems to conflict with the message a little. The clean spot is above the skull and the grungy splotch is above the girl with the light. So if that was intentional, I'm not sure exactly what it's trying to say.

I do like the concept, though. I think it probably wouldn't hurt to crop the view in a bit, since the huge wall feels like it has its own atmosphere that's taking attention away from the subjects. It's good, but that's my basic advice if you were to try again.
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Nilanja Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012
yes, you are right! the skull and the candle don't stand out enough...but I didn't want to crop the pic even more. if I try it again, I would shoot it outside, maybe in a forest...
I was very unhappy with the background...it just doesn't fit...it was blank white first...
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ScionicSpectre Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Shooting outside sounds like a good idea just because of the lighting. I look forward to whatever you come up with next. :)
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Nilanja Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012
:eager:
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sweetsongbird Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Student Writer
oh my goodness! asddlkajsdaj!
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Nilanja Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012
:blushes:
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