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October 22, 2012
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Oct 22, 2012, 12:56:36 PM
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:iconnilanja:
the yesterday's picture seemed to be very unpopular... and the second concept I shot yesterday turned out to be really bad haha, so I got kinda angry... I just had the feeling that I need a result! A restless feeling permeated in me. I had to take a photo! I really had to haha^^ so I took this one...it really has no meaning but I would love to hear your thoughts about it!

and please can anyone give me a constructive ciritque?! that would be awesome!




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*insolitus85 Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
In general, in like it. But there is one thing I cannot get. Either the outfit is weird or your pose is weird.
And it might be the toning too, but on the left, just above your head it looks like an elbow and part of your arm. However I think it is just the outfit? :P
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=Nilanja Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist
I really can not see any arm or elbow xD
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*insolitus85 Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Must be my twisted delusional mind then. Here: [link] (I'll take it down when you've seen it)
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=Nilanja Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist
Haha omg xD I would have never seen that hahaha. but it is the fabric xD
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*insolitus85 Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:XD:
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*crh Oct 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
sei weiter zornig, wenn dann solche fotos rauskommen ;-)
schoenes zusammenspiel von ernster miene, zartem stoff und tollem farbton.
einziger kritikpunkt: die sichtbaren tonband-uebergaenge in der vignettierung (die kenn ich von meinen bildern leider viel zu gut...)
:rose: :heart:
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=Nilanja Oct 26, 2012  Hobbyist
dankeschön :giggle:

wenn du mir noch verrätst, was tonbandübergänge sind, mach ichs beim nächsten mal besser :P
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*crh Oct 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
nichts zu danken. bezueglich der Frage: ich denke, dass der englische begriff "banding" ist - tritt auf bei zu wenigen "gradient steps", am besten ich gebe das wort weiter an die Experten: [link] ;-)
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=Nilanja Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist
oooh ok, danke!!! :D
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*gigi50 Oct 24, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
You are perfect :winner: SO beautiful and well done!
You look like a queen here :) A young beautiful one :)
The shades are exquisite
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