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the yesterday's picture seemed to be very unpopular... and the second concept I shot yesterday turned out to be really bad haha, so I got kinda angry... I just had the feeling that I need a result! A restless feeling permeated in me. I had to take a photo! I really had to haha^^ so I took this one...it really has no meaning but I would love to hear your thoughts about it!

and please can anyone give me a constructive ciritque?! that would be awesome!




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:iconkarinta:
Karinta Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Student General Artist
Very nice composition. :D
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Nilanja Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013
thanks :D
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:iconkarinta:
Karinta Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Student General Artist
You're welcome!
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insolitus85 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
In general, in like it. But there is one thing I cannot get. Either the outfit is weird or your pose is weird.
And it might be the toning too, but on the left, just above your head it looks like an elbow and part of your arm. However I think it is just the outfit? :P
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:iconnilanja:
Nilanja Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012
I really can not see any arm or elbow xD
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:iconinsolitus85:
insolitus85 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Must be my twisted delusional mind then. Here: [link] (I'll take it down when you've seen it)
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:iconnilanja:
Nilanja Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012
Haha omg xD I would have never seen that hahaha. but it is the fabric xD
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:iconinsolitus85:
insolitus85 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:XD:
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:iconcrh:
crh Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
sei weiter zornig, wenn dann solche fotos rauskommen ;-)
schoenes zusammenspiel von ernster miene, zartem stoff und tollem farbton.
einziger kritikpunkt: die sichtbaren tonband-uebergaenge in der vignettierung (die kenn ich von meinen bildern leider viel zu gut...)
:rose: :heart:
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:iconnilanja:
Nilanja Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012
dankeschön :giggle:

wenn du mir noch verrätst, was tonbandübergänge sind, mach ichs beim nächsten mal besser :P
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crh Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
nichts zu danken. bezueglich der Frage: ich denke, dass der englische begriff "banding" ist - tritt auf bei zu wenigen "gradient steps", am besten ich gebe das wort weiter an die Experten: [link] ;-)
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Nilanja Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012
oooh ok, danke!!! :D
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gigi50 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
You are perfect :winner: SO beautiful and well done!
You look like a queen here :) A young beautiful one :)
The shades are exquisite
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Nilanja Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012
awwww thank you so damn much :nuu: :blush:
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gigi50 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:iconvicing0034::iconvicing005::iconvicing006::iconrubyangel7595:
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:iconsurfender:
surfender Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012
just wow...! so beautiful.
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:iconnilanja:
Nilanja Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012
thanks you so much dear :tighthug:
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:iconbatmantoo:
batmantoo Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Sehr stylish! :)
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:iconnilanja:
Nilanja Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
hihi danke :D
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thestargazer23 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Wieder gelungen =)
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:iconnilanja:
Nilanja Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
vielen dank!! :happybounce:
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:iconjoergjohannmueller:
JoergJohannMueller Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Wonderful work. Lovely concept!
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:iconnilanja:
Nilanja Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
thanks you very much!! :D
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JoergJohannMueller Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
You're welcome!
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SouHkman Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
Very cute :blowkiss:
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:iconnilanja:
Nilanja Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
thanks :blush:
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Carpetbagger-Captain Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
Gorgeous!
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:iconnilanja:
Nilanja Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
thanks :blush:
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sweetsongbird Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Student Writer
Great work Pezi!

But for constructive criticism, I think shooting this from a different angle and a different facial expression would have a greater impact. The expression is a little plain.

But I do enjoy this. Well done!
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:iconnilanja:
Nilanja Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
thanks :D
I have tried so many different positions and expressions :( which one would you recommend?
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sweetsongbird Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Student Writer
Maybe a side angle with you looking straight ahead (not at the camera)? And for expressions, extremely hurt expressions, lost and wild, or mabe even a smile XD
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Nilanja Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
I have tried all of those acutally...
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RHARIZONA Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Actually, I think this is a great expression! It just leaves everything to the viewer. I'm pretty sure this is one of those pictures, some people look at and become sad and others become happy...
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Nilanja Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
thanks^^
I don't know...I don't understand viewers lately :P
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RHARIZONA Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
sorry...^^
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by-MK Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
really really good, reminds of a fashion photo ^_^ or beauty ^^"
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Nilanja Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
thanks a lot :nuu:
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by-MK Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
you're very welcome ^-^
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A-Negative-Blood Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
I think it's amazing!!!!:love:
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:iconnilanja:
Nilanja Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
awwww thank you!! :D
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A-Negative-Blood Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
Anytime :XD:
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Coulicath Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
This one is really cool. I like the subtleness of the detail and the use of the sepia-ish effect as well. Great job!
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Nilanja Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
thank you very much :D
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Taorax Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
ich kann nich genau sagen warum (ich weiß, hilft dir super weiter^^) ...aber ich find des bild echt schön
...du schaffst es echt mich mit deinen bildern zu begeistern...bin echt froh dich zu watchen :)
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Nilanja Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
awww danke, das ist echt nett :blush:
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mdomaradzki Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Professional Photographer
It is a lovely glamour shot! I don't think that there is much to be gleaned from a general critique!

If you want a critique then you should aim your composition at a specific target, such as a fashion magazine or modelling portfolio etc. Then you will most likely get a matching response and give you insights into your lighting technique or your styling and so on. If you are looking to see what will get you the most views and faves then review your past successes and see what they have in common and try to build on that. I've been doing something like that recently with mixed results and I'm also finding that I need to push my photography into directions I don't particularly like or enjoy just to satisfy the crowd.
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Nilanja Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
thank you very much!!!

I have tried that before...to understand why people like this one and the other one not....but I don't find anything to build on
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mdomaradzki Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Professional Photographer
Yeah, it can be perplexing. Anyway, I believe you will be better served by creating visions that satisfy you as an artist. ;)
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Nilanja Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
yeah probably...
sometimes I think if it isn't even better not to upload pictures anywhere and just be happy with them...but on the other hand I wouldn't get any better without reactions to it
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another-ex-deviant Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
that's some crazy outfit you got on there, lol. very beautiful indeed pezi.... i love the warm golden tone. will the unedited original be on facebook at all? i really like what you've done here!
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