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untitled self by Nilanja untitled self by Nilanja
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Please don't feel offended by my critique. I write this as a constructive critique.
Maybe you could add some more contrast in this photo. To me the photo is a bit pale. It's a pity the voile is more in focus than your eye(s), but I know from experience it's hard to get the eyes in focus with such voile in front of them.
Another thing you could consider when making a shot like this is to leave more space in the photo in the direction the subject is looking at. So for this photo: it would be better to have more space at the right hand side of the photo. Considering the format (square) I think you might have some space on the original?
Nevertheless: it's a great photo with the sepia tint.
Have a great day!
Kind regards,
Tjeerd Doosje aka HansAnders
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this is not intended to offend you, its my opinion and recomendations

well the picture is really good but, my photography teacher taught me that the portrait is in focus if one of the eyes is totally in focus, is a recommendation for the future i like the picture anyway. something that i didn't like to much is the blue filter, well i don't know if its blue or cooling filter but it will be more dramatic if the black parts of the picture looked really black, try taking picture on raw file it helps with the shadows, well that's my critique Im not a master, and my stile is weird but i like your work :D ill follow you
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DannyAnthony Apr 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This has been featured in DA Expo II here: [link]
Please check out the blog and favourite some pieces!
Maybe even suggest a deviant/group/deviation for the next issue?

Thanks, :Dan
peterle28 Apr 18, 2013  Professional Photographer
Sehr weiblich und sensibel - wunderbar!
oh vielen dank!!! :blowkiss:
peterle28 Apr 19, 2013  Professional Photographer
War mir eine Freude!
Wow, this is intense! The black and white scheme definitely makes the lace pop :D Simple, but makes an impact :clap:
thank you very much!!! :D
sweetsongbird Apr 7, 2013  Student Writer
GAH I love your photos ;_;
Lovely :heart: The expression on your face is perfect.
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