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Submitted: September 13, 2012
Image Size: 1.1 MB
Resolution: 5184×3456
Submitted with: Sta.sh

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Make:Canon
Model:Canon EOS 600D
Shutter Speed:1/125 second
Aperture:F/1.8
Focal Length:50 mm
ISO Speed:100
Date Taken:Sep 12, 2012, 12:58:41 PM
Software:Adobe Photoshop CS5 Macintosh
Sensor Size:22mm

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water the stream, let it growby =Nilanja

Photography / Conceptual

~waveystar and I were taking some photos at a stream, the water was rather cold. I was already in the water and ~waveystar was just joining when she grabbed a branch to hang onto and suddenly a watering can felt out of the bush haha.
It was full of dirt and we had to pull that out before we could use it for the photo^^
Altough this was very spontaneous and I wasn't sure if the photo would even turn out good I really like the outcome!

What do you guys think?

Critique by *torivarn Sep 16, 2012, 2:37:52 PM

Hey

You've asked me to give you a critique on this piece. I'll do my best

Don't mind the star-ratings so much, they are just stars

I would probably make 2-3 minorchanges to this image. Since art is a subject to personaltaste my recommendations aren't rules.

I would up the contrast on the backgroun a little, this to make the girl pop out a little more.
I would also try to adjust the temperature in the image a little and by the looks of it, I think warming it up a little would be nice.
Also I would up the vibrance of the image as a whole to make it look a bit more fresh in a way.

I think you've done a really great job here and I'm looking forward to see more from you

Hope this was somewhat helpful

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